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The whore by ~senza-amore:iconsenza-amore:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Narrative > Open


She is not paid in bill, coin,
or fancy meal.
She is not paid with jewelry,
a safe ride home, or flowers.
You pay her
with three words
and three words
alone.
You may lay her down
and spread her out,
bruise her and
abuse
her
pull her hair and slap her.
You must only say
"I love you"
I love you
and she is all yours
for the taking and the
{ravishing}
©2009 ~senza-amore
:iconsenza-amore:

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:icontainted-flesh:
~Tainted-Flesh Jun 24, 2009, 2:38:33 PM
='( too many girls are ending up like this, good on you for speaking out.
I myself am male, but I'm still disgusted at how my fellow males treat girls like they're just lists of body parts

--
Life is hard
Fire burns
Love is binding

=(

Life is firm, and will always hold strong
Fire burns, and will always grow
Love is binding, and will always hold you close

=)
XoxoX I Love You Anna
:iconsenza-amore:
~senza-amore Jun 24, 2009, 6:48:01 PM
Thanks so much! I'm thinking of following it up with a more vivid/graphic one, but I wanted to keep this one simple.
And it is very sad how many women are abused :shakefist:

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Feel free to let me know if this next part gets a bit too personal. I've been told I have boundary issues.
:icontainted-flesh:
~Tainted-Flesh Jun 24, 2009, 6:53:00 PM
Keep it how it is, it's powerful.
How do you post links btw?
I want to advertise your poem =)

--
Life is hard
Fire burns
Love is binding

=(

Life is firm, and will always hold strong
Fire burns, and will always grow
Love is binding, and will always hold you close

=)
XoxoX I Love You Anna
:iconsenza-amore:
~senza-amore Jun 24, 2009, 7:21:35 PM
wow thanks :D
I think you do it like this:Name of Image
(more info can be found if you scroll to the bottom of deviant and click the Help/FAQ link)
:heart:

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Feel free to let me know if this next part gets a bit too personal. I've been told I have boundary issues.
:iconsenza-amore:
~senza-amore Jun 24, 2009, 7:22:08 PM
lol... well that didn't work at all!

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Feel free to let me know if this next part gets a bit too personal. I've been told I have boundary issues.
:icontainted-flesh:
~Tainted-Flesh Jun 24, 2009, 7:24:28 PM
kk I'll check it out =]

--
Life is hard
Fire burns
Love is binding

=(

Life is firm, and will always hold strong
Fire burns, and will always grow
Love is binding, and will always hold you close

=)
XoxoX I Love You Anna
:icontainted-flesh:
~Tainted-Flesh Jul 6, 2009, 5:52:12 PM
Yer I added this to my collection [link]
=)

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[link]

Live every day as though it is your last, one day, it will be, and chances are it'll be the worst day ever.

We are all but corpses waiting to be buried
:iconhisdarkprincess:
~HisDarkPrincess Jul 31, 2009, 11:14:42 AM
this poem is amazing...
wow.
and its so true.
Im so glad im not the only girl who sees this happening.

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Complaining never got anything done.

~~~~~~~~~

Pity the agnostic dyslexic insomniac, for she lies awake at nights wondering if there really is a dog.

~~~~~~~~~
-HisDarkPrincess-
:iconsenza-amore:
~senza-amore Jul 31, 2009, 12:00:04 PM
thank you

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Feel free to let me know if this next part gets a bit too personal. I've been told I have boundary issues.
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